Canaille
Canaille ~ "The Dutch cultural and journalistic eliteresides along Amsterdam's age-old canals."Attending gigs next to an Amsterdamcanal she's searching for her lover's hand,his solid shoulder that...
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Dutch --the tone & function of the lines change as you move into the sestet (surprised? no) to a description that is more observational, more intimate. While I'll not quite sure what showered the...
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Hiya Mike,Thanx, cuzzin!Yeah, I'm very pleased myself with these 5 lines you quote! Sancta simplicitas! See ya, Crispin
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hi dutch, this would rearrange the rhyme scheme, but L5, i think, could sound much more conversational if it read: "she doesn't give a damn for politics," rather than "for politics, she doesn't dive a...
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Hiya Toni,Ooh! There you're asking something! Hmmmm....I admit to the inversion of the line in question, yet on the other hand I wanted to pick up "for" again as featured in line 2: "-- she's...
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